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The One I Want by Chelle Sloan

caras_reviews's review against another edition

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5.0

Wes has just had his life turn upside down with his wife leaving and walking out on him and the kids months before his last season is supposed to finish.

He moved back to his hometown to be near friends and family who could help out. But he still needs help with other things. Enter Betsy. She's the new Nanny. The kids love her. She's great with them.

Betsy is a carefree person who hasn't found her place in the world yet. So she decides to take the nanny position because, why not? She enjoys being around the kids, and they like being around her. Wes is still trying to finalise his divorce, so he feels he shouldn't be having the thoughts he does for Betsy. They are both attracted to each other, you can tell in the way they hold each other's gaze.

This is really well done, and Betsy is written so well that I can almost hear her southern twang in my head. Betsy is a confident, self-assured woman. The words flow nicely, and the familiarity with Wes' friends is also well done. I love the kids and their different personalities. I feel for Em as she's older than the other two, so this is going to hit her, and she's eventually going to break down.

This is a story of an NFL player on the cusp of retirement, with 3 kids going through a divorce. It's written so eloquently that I feel the angst at what Wes is going through. Juggling a demanding job and trying to be as present as he can be. Both he and Betsy are responsible and trying not to do anything that will upset the kids at the moment. They have grown attached to her, so I can imagine they'd think she'd abandoned them too if things didn't work out with Wes. Betsy puts on a strong front. Deep down, though, she wants someone to love her.

This is a story about 3 kids whose mother left them without a goodbye. It's about a family trying to make it through this new reality, and with Betsy, it has been easier. And when she receives a text, it sets off all of Wes' insecurities and his own abandonment issues. Being with someone for so long and they up and leave would be very hard to just 'get over', so he lashed out and said some hurtful things.

I love that this story felt like a biography and how they managed through this difficult part of their lives. It felt very real, and I could imagine things like this happened all too often in situations like this. Whilst the situation isn't exactly the same, I could feel myself relate to those feelings of having to start over when your whole life has just been upended.

The kids absolutely made this story, and I loved the close friendship that the 4 amigos had! This is one of those stories that once you pass the turmoil and angst, it's a feel-good story of love and moving forward, really well done and a pleasure to read.

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Wes has just had his life turn upside down with his wife leaving and walking out on him and the kids months before his last season is supposed to finish.

He moved back to his hometown to be near friends and family who could help out. But he still needs help with other things. Enter Betsy. She's the new Nanny. The kids love her. She's great with them.

Betsy is a carefree person who hasn't found her place in the world yet. So she decides to take the nanny position because, why not? She enjoys being around the kids, and they like being around her. Wes is still trying to finalise his divorce, so he feels he shouldn't be having the thoughts he does for Betsy. They are both attracted to each other, you can tell in the way they hold each other's gaze.

This is really well done, and Betsy is written so well that I can almost hear her southern twang in my head. Betsy is a confident, self-assured woman. The words flow nicely, and the familiarity with Wes' friends is also well done. I love the kids and their different personalities. I feel for Em as she's older than the other two, so this is going to hit her, and she's eventually going to break down.

This is a story of an NFL player on the cusp of retirement, with 3 kids going through a divorce. It's written so eloquently that I feel the angst at what Wes is going through. Juggling a demanding job and trying to be as present as he can be. Both he and Betsy are responsible and trying not to do anything that will upset the kids at the moment. They have grown attached to her, so I can imagine they'd think she'd abandoned them too if things didn't work out with Wes. Betsy puts on a strong front. Deep down, though, she wants someone to love her.

This is a story about 3 kids whose mother left them without a goodbye. It's about a family trying to make it through this new reality, and with Betsy, it has been easier. And when she receives a text, it sets off all of Wes' insecurities and his own abandonment issues. Being with someone for so long and they up and leave would be very hard to just 'get over', so he lashed out and said some hurtful things.

I love that this story felt like a biography and how they managed through this difficult part of their lives. It felt very real, and I could imagine things like this happened all too often in situations like this. Whilst the situation isn't exactly the same, I could feel myself relate to those feelings of having to start over when your whole life has just been upended.

The kids absolutely made this story, and I loved the close friendship that the 4 amigos had! This is one of those stories that once you pass the turmoil and angst, it's a feel-good story of love and moving forward, really well done and a pleasure to read.

books_are_myescape's review against another edition

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4.0

4.5 ⭐️- First time reading this book by this author and I definitely loved it! This is the type of story that gives you all the feels. It is serious and deep, but lighthearted and fun.

kathleenboggs's review against another edition

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funny hopeful lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

tea_nikolova's review against another edition

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lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.75

sirsangel's review against another edition

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challenging emotional hopeful medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.0

I like Wes, Betsy, the kids, his parents, his friends, her friend, Whitley. 
I'd like to kick her parents, also his ex wife in the gonads!



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fiddleysticks's review against another edition

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lighthearted fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No

3.5


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a_thurkettle's review against another edition

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emotional funny hopeful lighthearted medium-paced

4.5

brooklynlowe's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional funny hopeful inspiring lighthearted reflective fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

You already know I gobbled this up. A city girl moves to the small town of Rolling Hills to make a new start for herself. She meets the getting a divorced, single father, with a crazy ex. Does this sound familiar? While Wes and Betsy’s is a slow burn, mine was not… 😂 

I loved the relationship Betsy had with not just the kids (and same, I want to be Emerson when I grow up), but Wes’s mom. Literally I want to be Peggy. She just knows. And the relationship that Wes grew up watching between his mom and dad, is what I want.

There were a lot of similarities between Wes and Betsy’s relationship, with my husbands and mine. The trauma of past relationships follows into the next, and unless there is communication and trust, it just won’t work. Chelle does an amazing job making these relationships and characters real. 

I can’t wait to read Oliver’s story. 

vanessahmata's review against another edition

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medium-paced

5.0