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Witches Get Stuff Done by Molly Harper
adventurous
funny
mysterious
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.5
The Friend Zone by Kristen Callihan
emotional
funny
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Miscarriage
Replaying the Game by Emily Tudor
Did not finish book. Stopped at 5%.
Did not finish book. Stopped at 5%.
The writing had a lot of redundancies that frustrated me. Example, "It doesn't snow back home in California, and I’ve loved being able to see snow fall from the sky since I don’t see it back home.” and "None of us knows why she hates him—nobody dares to ask—but all we know is something happened, and now she can’t stand him.”
The first 5 pages are also all tell, and no show. Entire paragraphs about each character’s personality, all of the background of their friendship, etc.
I can’t rate the actual plot, but I would recommend a content editor and line editor to help tighten the prose and improve the flow.
The first 5 pages are also all tell, and no show. Entire paragraphs about each character’s personality, all of the background of their friendship, etc.
I can’t rate the actual plot, but I would recommend a content editor and line editor to help tighten the prose and improve the flow.