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spot_the_book_unicorn's review
adventurous
emotional
funny
hopeful
informative
inspiring
reflective
sad
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
christyduke_5117's review
3.0
Even in this complete rewrite I still didn’t fall for the MCs. Oh well, I’m sure it’s me and not them.
Note to author: I totally respect you doing this total overhaul but you forgot one thing… Cherry Creek is a small town, but Savannah GA so isn’t. It lends this unreality to the whole thing because of such a glaring oversight.
Note to author: I totally respect you doing this total overhaul but you forgot one thing… Cherry Creek is a small town, but Savannah GA so isn’t. It lends this unreality to the whole thing because of such a glaring oversight.
scatterbrainxy's review
1.0
there are too many side characters idk who is who
ending is unfinished, because what happens to owen? what about marcel? where are antoine's parents?
idk about fitz. he was being such an ass to antoine, then kisses him out of nowhere. there wasn't a solid development in their relationship
ending is unfinished, because what happens to owen? what about marcel? where are antoine's parents?
idk about fitz. he was being such an ass to antoine, then kisses him out of nowhere. there wasn't a solid development in their relationship
heuse1ac's review
1.0
Am I missing pieces of the book or something??? There was literally no resolution on Owen, I don't get it. Guess that could be a future books problem idk. But yeah this was already gonna be a one star, I feel like if by the end of a romance book, I don't lie and want the best for one or both of the characters, it's an epic fail, and I wish Fitz nothing but the worst. Waited the whole book for there to be something about him redeeming enough to counteract being THE CHIEF OF THE FIRE DEPARTMENT and taunting and harassing someone in a car accident because he felt like being a dick. And it never came.
tange_rine's review
3.0
I read Make you mine not long ago so I was a bit biased. I like the writing of this author, specially with the characters with disabilities, I find that refreshing. But, yes, BUT, this book was a bit boring actually. Too many repetitive situations, and even when I enjoy the slow burn like any other human being, this was too slow. Smut, good but it could be a lot better, I think the teasing was superior.
Don't get me wrong, I like the story but I was expecting a lot more.
Don't get me wrong, I like the story but I was expecting a lot more.
faysmmbooks's review
An okay beginning as Ethan Fitzgerald "Fritz", 15 years was recovering from being caught in a fire on a camping trip and was going through complex physiotherapy.
Fast forward: Now, at 23 years, he was a fireman/paramedic and had become Captain.
Antoine was a twin with his brother, Marcel, who was born blind and is now in another country with his partner.
Out in a new location for a job, his car runs off the road, and he meets Ethan. Their initial meeting wasn't good, with lots of hot angry fire between them. They'd already made nicknames for themselves, aka Hollywood and Smokey.
Light my fire was read as a standalone for me knowing this was book 2 in the series. There are a lot of characters mentioned at the start that I was lost in the story.
Scenes play out with the community's concerns about new development for their town.
Accidents happen, and being there at the right time leads to a kiss.
I couldn't get into this story for some reason; the chemistry between these guys was waiting to ignite for them. My reads of this author are usually great, but this book was a miss. I would have liked to have loved this book, with the enemies-to-love theme being a favourite.
Fast forward: Now, at 23 years, he was a fireman/paramedic and had become Captain.
Antoine was a twin with his brother, Marcel, who was born blind and is now in another country with his partner.
Out in a new location for a job, his car runs off the road, and he meets Ethan. Their initial meeting wasn't good, with lots of hot angry fire between them. They'd already made nicknames for themselves, aka Hollywood and Smokey.
Light my fire was read as a standalone for me knowing this was book 2 in the series. There are a lot of characters mentioned at the start that I was lost in the story.
Scenes play out with the community's concerns about new development for their town.
Accidents happen, and being there at the right time leads to a kiss.
I couldn't get into this story for some reason; the chemistry between these guys was waiting to ignite for them. My reads of this author are usually great, but this book was a miss. I would have liked to have loved this book, with the enemies-to-love theme being a favourite.
abreese's review
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
emilylovesbooks94's review
5.0
Fitz and Antoine's story had all my favorite qualities of an enemies to lovers romance: snarky banter, steamy sexual tension, and that aggressive hate-that-I-want-you passion that kept them in each other's orbit. Fitz was very protective of his home town and didn't want to see any major changes, so when Antoine came crashing in with his tourism and marketing campaign and shook everything up, he and Fitz butted heads immediately. Their arguments could have been contained to the first time they met each other, but Antoine had the worst luck in Savannah, getting into a series of accidents and mishaps that Fitz inevitably ended up rescuing him from. The two of them undeniably hated each other at first and didn't want to be around each other, but with each forced interaction, they learned something new about each other that eventually softened their sharp edges. When they fell into a hot, no-feelings-allowed fling, I was overwhelmed by how wildly compatible they were in bed, and that really set the wheels in motion for the rest of the book. Fitz and Antoine tried to keep things strictly physical, but deeper feelings started creeping in as they spent more time together. Both men were deeply lonely, Fitz because of his fear of being let down by a lover and Antoine because he'd grown increasingly unhappy with his nomadic lifestyle, but they fought hard against their developing romance. Even as their relationship started to feel like everything each of them were looking for, they kept all their fears and insecurities internalized and didn't communicate with each other. I honestly think a lot of their angst would have been prevented with a solid hour long talk, but Antoine and Fitz were determined to take the harder path to find love and put themselves through the wringer before finally embracing their connection with open arms.
**I voluntarily read an ARC of this book. This review expresses my honest thoughts and opinions.
**I voluntarily read an ARC of this book. This review expresses my honest thoughts and opinions.
indiekay's review
3.0
I read the first book in this series recently and really loved it, so I decided to read this one after I restarted my Kindle Unlimited subscription again. Unfortunely this one fell flat for me. There's way too much info dumping at the beginning of the book - which was a problem I had with the first one too but I could forgive it with the first one, while this one had info dumping without ever actually expanding on that information throughout the rest of the story. The main characters also go from "I hate him" to "I love him" in 3 seconds flat, and the ending felt really rushed.
mynameisprerna's review
2.5
Wow, the first book in this series was quite good - emotional story, developed characters, well-written… and then this one… well, it stunk.
There were too many mistakes to be excused - typos, missing words, inconsistencies, etc. I think some of this may have been because this was a rewritten form of a previously published book, but if someone is going to go through the trouble of rewriting and adapting a former work, I think they should pay attention to the details they wanted changed.
Another major issue I had with this book is that Savannah is repeatedly described and characterized as a small town. That also happened in the first book, but to a milder degree, and in a charming way. It felt like it was conveying that the business owners on this street knew each other well. But this book truly did describe it as a tiny town with only 2 realtors and 3 people on night shift at the fire department. In actuality, Savannah is a city of about 150,000 people! That’s comparable to Pasadena, CA or Syracuse, NY. Those are moderately sized cities! Definitely not a place where everyone knows everyone and they’re all in each other’s business.
As for the romance, I liked the premise of the small town community leader having beef with the city slicker who’s come in to ruin the town. But Antoine didn’t really do anything to make Fitz hate him, and his job was more about town revitalization than anything insidious. Fitz’s hatred made no sense!
Then there were some plot points I truly hated -It was really irresponsible for Fitz to not take Antoine to the hospital after smoke inhalation. Even worse, it then felt like a violation to have sex with him after Antoine just said he felt drunk from the adrenaline crash.
Antoine’s boss’s reaction to Antoine resigning was so over the top and came out of nowhere. Why was he acting like that?!
Owen’s assault was actually a central part of the book because Fitz was worried about Owen’s behavior throughout the story, and the way he lashed out at the lake was so consequential… to reveal in a few throw away sentences that he had been assaulted and then the man was fired and left town was so… not just bizarre, but also an inappropriate way to handle such a sensitive and important topic!
Overall, I don’t know what went wrong for the author with this book, but it was a total dud. Because I enjoyed the first one and because I really like that they include so much disability rep, I’m going to keep reading, and I hope it gets better!
Stars: ⭐️⭐️💫 2.5: Not quite what I’d call good. Some redeeming qualities, but still bad or meh.
There were too many mistakes to be excused - typos, missing words, inconsistencies, etc. I think some of this may have been because this was a rewritten form of a previously published book, but if someone is going to go through the trouble of rewriting and adapting a former work, I think they should pay attention to the details they wanted changed.
Another major issue I had with this book is that Savannah is repeatedly described and characterized as a small town. That also happened in the first book, but to a milder degree, and in a charming way. It felt like it was conveying that the business owners on this street knew each other well. But this book truly did describe it as a tiny town with only 2 realtors and 3 people on night shift at the fire department. In actuality, Savannah is a city of about 150,000 people! That’s comparable to Pasadena, CA or Syracuse, NY. Those are moderately sized cities! Definitely not a place where everyone knows everyone and they’re all in each other’s business.
As for the romance, I liked the premise of the small town community leader having beef with the city slicker who’s come in to ruin the town. But Antoine didn’t really do anything to make Fitz hate him, and his job was more about town revitalization than anything insidious. Fitz’s hatred made no sense!
Then there were some plot points I truly hated -
Antoine’s boss’s reaction to Antoine resigning was so over the top and came out of nowhere. Why was he acting like that?!
Owen’s assault was actually a central part of the book because Fitz was worried about Owen’s behavior throughout the story, and the way he lashed out at the lake was so consequential… to reveal in a few throw away sentences that he had been assaulted and then the man was fired and left town was so… not just bizarre, but also an inappropriate way to handle such a sensitive and important topic!
Overall, I don’t know what went wrong for the author with this book, but it was a total dud. Because I enjoyed the first one and because I really like that they include so much disability rep, I’m going to keep reading, and I hope it gets better!
Stars: ⭐️⭐️💫 2.5: Not quite what I’d call good. Some redeeming qualities, but still bad or meh.
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️ 4: Brown Girl Spicy
Multiple descriptive and detailed open door scenes; smut is very prominent but it does not overtake plot
Perspective: third
Tense: past
POV: dual
Source: Library: Libby