Reviews with content warning for Racial slurs - The City We Became

Not my favorite plot, but still a really cool concept. Anything by NK Jemisin is a must-read to see firsthand how important POC voices are in sci-fi and fantasy.

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mckays's review against another edition

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dark reflective tense slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? No
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A

2.5

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ottolee's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional funny informative mysterious tense fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0

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maryellen's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark emotional hopeful mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0

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dawntin's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.0

This book was not for me. There were a ton of pop culture references and the overall message of the book, while meaningful, was too heavy-handed in my opinion. Each character was introduced with the traits that made them special (race, ethnicity, sexuality, occupation, etc.) and they all had superpowers, due to being the avatars of major cities. This was cool and all, but I felt like the author tried way too hard to be quirky and inadvertently ended up playing into some stereotypes in the process of making her characters super-quirky and diverse. Like, did the main Indian character really need to have

math-related

superpowers? Also, the avatar of Hong Kong literally being named Hong Kong and his accent being described as “Chinese-inflected British English” was straight up weird. The Black characters were fine though, maybe because the author is Black herself. Besides the characters, the pacing was weird and the book wrapped everything up in the last 20 or so pages. It felt like there was so much build-up before they saved the day, and when they did, I wasn’t even sure what was happening.

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secre's review against another edition

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dark mysterious tense slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.5

I really enjoyed Jemisin's 'The Broken Earth' series and was really looking forward to reading this one. Unfortunately, it just didn't catch me in the same way. Don't get me wrong, it's interesting, it has interesting characters and a tantalising narrative... but it didn't grip me. I don't think it helped that I found the opening chapters of the novel confusing and it took me a significant period of time to work out what was going on, but I think it's also down to the pacing and the constant switching between characters which made it difficult to pin down a narrative.

It's unique, I'll give it that. Set in a city trying to be born, New York has chosen five avatars, or protectors. Five individuals who will in turn become the city. Manny, or Manhatten, cold and ruthless, somehow threatening even though he doesn't remember his original identity. Bronca, or Bronx, with her mistrust and doubt, even as she becomes a community leader. Brooklyn, musician, lawyer and caretaker. Padmini, Queens, a quiet academic. And Aislyn, Staten Island, isolated and easily manipulated. Each hold a different power, each are rooted to a different section of the city. It's a multi-cultured mixing hub of individuals, as Jemisin points out, much like New York itself.

It's clever and holds a powerful message, but sometimes Jemisin falls into the trap of preaching rather than displaying and the moralising is too overt and self conscious. It's thought provoking and innovative, but it becomes bogged down in the message rather than the plot and therefore loses a lot of what could have been a tautly written plot. There's a lot of repetition as we see the same events through different characters eyes and a lot of bouncing around when it would have been better to be held by two or three main perspectives to pull the narrative forward.

In essence, this has a lot of potential. It's unlike anything I've read before, but it's trying to do too many things and suffers from a lack of cohesion leading to a lot of waffling before we get to the narrative. It's nowhere near as good as Jemisin's Broken Earth series which was frankly, spectacular.

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heini's review against another edition

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dark hopeful medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? N/A
Loveable characters? N/A
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

Suomennos oli hämmentävä. Ehkä ne ovat tyylikeinoja tai en vain ymmärtänyt, mutta lukukokemusta haittaa, kun jatkuvasti ilmaisut särähtävät korvaan. Puhutaan jonkun ensimmäisestä rodeosta; henkilö, jota alkuperäisteoksessa kuvaillaan ja nimitetään sanoilla 'strawberry blond man-bun' suomennetaan mansikanvaaleaksi hipster sämpyläksi; yleinen kirosana on paskapökäle ja joku on hullumpi kuin lepakonpaska (batshit crazy?).

Itse kirjasta: Seuraamme New York Cityn kaupunginosien ihmisavatareja, jotka ilmentävät suurkaupungin monimuotoisuutta.
Hahmot olivat mukavan ristiriitaisia ja oli mielenkiintoista, kuinka välillä ihmisen kauheista piirteistä tuli ominaisia ja "hyödyllisiä", osa tarvittavaa kokonaisuutta.
Tarina oli värikkäiden kertojiensa vuoksi hauska ja myös sivuhenkilöt olivat huippuja,

(eräs lempparihahmoni oli perinteisen Checker-taksin kuljettaja Madison, tosin luultavasti siksi, että kuvittelin hänet Roundabout-pelin Georgioksi ("the worlds first revolving limousine driver"). Heillä oli samanlaista hällä-väliä ja auttamisen asennetta.

Valkoinen ja kirkkaus oli pahuuden ilmikuva, mikä on tietysti myös käänteinen kerrontaperinteen musta/pimeys=paha logiikalle, jota on ihonväriinkin sovellettu.
Kirjan yksi ydinkuvaus on, kuinka ennakkoluulot ja oletukset tuhoavat meitä (yksilöitä, yhteisöjä, yhteiskuntia) sisältä päin ja vain ruokkivat yhteisiä vihollisiamme.

Pelko, että ihmisyys tuhotaan kosmisessa maailmojen sodassa / pelko, joka syntyy kaikesta siitä "normaalista" tai normaaliksi hyväksystä (kauheista ja epämukavista asioista), jota arkemme ihmisinä ihmisten keskellä on.

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takarakei's review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.5

First of all - I read this in combination with the audiobook - which is FANTASTIC! Absolutely phenomenal narration AND sound design/effects, it was almost like listening to a graphic audio dramatized version! So I can't recommend the audiobook enough (especially if you are someone who listens to SFF audio). Although I will note it was helpful to be reading along at parts due to the effects.

Now could I explain the dynamics of all that happens in this book? Absolutely not, it's one of those books where you just have to accept the concepts that are being presented to you without a lot of questioning. I mean, people becoming the embodiment of cities? weird concept. You just gotta go with it! Along the way you'll get discussions of race, art, and what it means to "belong" to a place.

If you're a NYC area person I def think this is an interesting read! Very NYC-prideful. I personally am NOT from NYC or know all that much about it, so I couldn't pick up on if there were any inaccuracies in any way, but Jemisin has lived there for a long time and did a lot of research so I trust that she got it right. I really enjoyed all the little history bits of information thrown in about the city.

There's no one out there really writing SFF like Jemisin, and I am very excited to continue with this series.

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