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A review by patricia71
No After You by Nicole Pyland
5.0
I always wanted to read Dani and Peyton’s story when I read All the love songs. So happy that their story is finally on paper. I loved this one. Not as much as All the love songs. But the chemistry was wow. The sex was hot (but they could have kissed sooner) There were a couple of scenes that I wanted on paper, that would have made there chemistry even better. Like the night they spent after the first kiss. And meeting Peyton’s family and spending the day at their house. I give it 4,7 stars. Also because Nicole sometimes writes ‘The woman’ instead of her or the name of the character. That makes it feel distant. Especially in a love making scene. For example
: Peyton was kissing the woman’s breast. Just say Dani’s breast or her breast!! But I love Hollywood/famous/rich people story’s.... I would not mind a short or so story about Dani and Peyton and Lennox and Kenzie.
: Peyton was kissing the woman’s breast. Just say Dani’s breast or her breast!! But I love Hollywood/famous/rich people story’s.... I would not mind a short or so story about Dani and Peyton and Lennox and Kenzie.