Continuity errors (at the start, Drav is introduced as someone with a body girls love, but it's a shame he prefers men and then towards the end it says he is as straight as a pencil. Also, the first time they have sex, Tony throws condoms on the bed, but then either doesn't appear to use them, or finishes this endeavour in a condom [no spoilers, but I don't understand how a condom would have worked if he was wearing one]), spelling and grammatical errors and the writing style felt very childish and choppy.