The multiple POVs and time jumps make this choppy. Additionally a lot of this has been, “the character did this and then this so she could do this”.  The adult women POVs read like that of a teenager instead of a grown woman. Finally, the mother keeping secrets from the daughter was petty and childish. 

All of these complaints made it hard for me to connect to any of the character. 


Might come back to, but probably won’t. Tried both physical copy and audio.