Well darn. DNF. I was really losing interest, and then I looked through some other reviews that didn't like it and they all had similar complaints, so I figured it wouldn't be getting any better for me. I wasn't really a fan of the writing style in this one....I can't even pinpoint what was wrong, but honestly? I thought this was a debut novel....turns out I was wrong. So I guess it's a style thing. And I just didn't really care for the character's all that much. And damn, after the whole virginity mess and then the yelling in the car ride back to Lake Tahoe? Yeah, I guess I'm dibs out. The good news?? Try the free sample of this one -- I knew within the first few pages that I wasn't big on the style, but thought it would change. So if you're not finding any problems, then yay for you b/c this one might work for you!! If not, then you're in the same boat as me....they can't all be winners right?