Very cute story but I think Vivi should’ve been an older and more mature female character. She’s 21 (barely legal) and it’s hella cringe….she’s childish and immature (because she’s so young) and also needs therapy due to her awful parents. These stories with big age gaps are so tired. Childish bratty behavior from these young women is not a sexy plot device. It’s annoying and weird. It’s obvious Vivi is too young for Luke…mental more than anything. She also knows she’s in over her head. Also she is supposed to be Haitian. Why is Luke always describing her skin is pink? At least call her beige. She’s black. His description is weird… She’s obviously light skinned so stop calling her pink.Vivi’s dad’s behavior needed to be called out as abusive and her mom complicit. They’re both trash and definitely should’ve been vilified more than just written as mean and problematic.