This story grew on me. I didn't like it at the beginning. It was sold to me as a 20 guys fight over 5 ladies. This only covered like one chapter so I had my back up. Then when the characters tried to talk scottish, it was cringe worthy. It was Irish not scottish! 
As the story went on, I was hooked. Full of twists and turns. The spice was great. I really look forward to continuing this series, even with the horrendous scottish accents.