A review by orionmerlin
The Odyssey by Homer

adventurous slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.5

Characters: 6/10
The characters in The Odyssey are memorable, with Odysseus standing out as a complex and flawed protagonist. However, while the secondary characters like Penelope and Telemachus are important to the story, I felt that some of them lacked depth and came across as archetypes rather than fully realized individuals. Despite Wilson’s accessible translation, I did not feel particularly invested in what happened to all of the characters, and some felt one-dimensional.
Atmosphere/Setting: 6/10
Wilson’s translation effectively brought the ancient world to life in certain moments, such as the vivid descriptions of the Cyclops’ cave and Circe’s island. However, I found that some scenes lacked the immersive quality I was expecting. The repetitive descriptions characteristic of oral epics often broke the sense of immediacy for me, and the energy of certain moments felt inconsistent.
Writing Style: 5/10
While I appreciated Emily Wilson’s modern and readable approach, I found the writing style lacked the elegance I had hoped for. The clarity of her prose was a strength, but it sometimes felt too pared down, losing some of the epic’s grandeur. I found the balance between dialogue and narration uneven, and while the story flowed well enough, the prose did not leave a lasting impression on me.
Plot: 5/10
The plot of The Odyssey is undeniably classic, but I found the pacing uneven. Some parts, like Odysseus’s recounting of his adventures to the Phaeacians, felt overly drawn out and tedious. While the overarching story of Odysseus’s journey home is compelling, the episodic structure made it feel repetitive at times. The reveals and resolutions were satisfying in moments, but the overall journey didn’t consistently keep me engaged.
Intrigue: 4/10
I found it difficult to stay consistently interested in the story. While certain moments, such as Odysseus’s encounters with the Cyclops and the suitors’ eventual downfall, were engaging, other sections required effort to get through. I often had to convince myself to pick the book back up, as the story didn’t always hold my attention.
Logic/Relationships: 5/10
The characters’ motives generally made sense, and the mythic logic of the world was clear enough. However, I felt that some relationships, particularly between minor characters, lacked depth and impact. While Odysseus and Penelope’s bond was a highlight, other connections felt underdeveloped or overly simplified, making the world and its relationships feel less cohesive than I would have liked.
Enjoyment: 4/10
Overall, my enjoyment of The Odyssey was inconsistent. While there were moments of intrigue and beauty, they were often overshadowed by sections that felt tedious or repetitive. I appreciated the modern sensibility of the translation, but I didn’t find myself fully immersed in the story or eager to return to it.