can't tell if the MC is really naive or dumb.

Probably both.

Prose is fine.

WB is shit

Characters are all very Republican, let's just say, which is not a bad thing in terms of beating the shit out of them afterwards necessarily but it was overbearingly hammering into your brain that we need Feminism (which is obviously a good thing)

Vibe excellent

Pacing is out to lunch.

3.5/5

Vasya would have solved so many problems if she cut her hair but is a worse procrastinator than i am!