Reviewing as I go

The first 15 pages of the book have no dialogue. Not one. I doubt I'll stick to reading this if the writing doesn't get better.

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Still reading. So, yes, the narration gets better.

But problem #2: An 17yr-old and a 15yr-old. Sigh.

#3: I understand that people have different lives in different countries, but isn't 13 a bit too early to be sexually active in the 21st century? I mean, this is not Westros.

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And we're back to pages of no dialogue.