I wanted to love this one, but it just feel short for me. I constantly felt like I was being rapidly jerked between an adorable rom-com and a spicy romance, but those things just didn’t blend well together.
The romance between the MC never made sense. I understand having an instant lust thay grows into love. But it seems all they ever had was lust, that only stayed at lust, but somehow they were each others true love. Their relationship was only built on their physical attraction, it was superficial and never grew beyond that. I had a hard time finding to believable that they were meant to be together forever and having a strong love.

Overall it was cute and fun, but I do think this one needs a couple more rounds of revisions to get to a place that makes it unputdownable.