I accidentally read this Twilight fanfiction? Check out my thoughts here.

I feel like this was really funny in imagining a better story for Charlie Swan. It was also about like a sad boy, squishy on the inside Charlie. There were a lot of elements of the story and the relationship I thought were sweet or entertaining, but as fanfiction, this relies too heavily on prior knowledge and forgets to actually build out or explain the world. It also because a little repetitive in how it developed the relationship and introduced conflict there.