Horrible editing. You're is used instead of your constantly. Just a lot of little mistakes that add up.

The story itself is interesting. I was intrigued and invested from the start. It was different and refreshing to read something that isn't like the rest of the stories in this genre. Though I wouldn't call this erotica as there isn't much of that in the book.

It ends in a cliffy but I'm not sure that I'll continue the series or not.