I like the overall idea of this story, but the execution falls a bit flat for me. Things wrap up too perfectly and somewhat easily. To be honest, though, I’m not sure that I would have enjoyed having the major resolution drawn out too much. It might have become repetitive. The compromise, to me, would have been to expand on certain parts of the story that are randomly dropped, like the fiancé. Or maybe don’t have all things resolved so easily. I won’t spoil anything more than what I’ve said already, but I was enjoying this a lot until the somewhat perfect resolution and plot points abruptly ending.