DNF page 202 but skimmed the rest, I'm so sad this was a flop for me, it genuinely seemed interesting.
 
If Sin & Saint from The L.O.R.Ds x Hunting Adeline had a baby this would be the book.

There’s little to no plot, The characters felt flat, esp the MMCs, they blended into each other and it was hard to tell them apart. There are so many unanswered questions: How did they find her? How long have they been stalking her? And both the dialogue and smut were borderline cringeworthy. I guess it wasn't that bad, but I wasn't sure if I wanted to laugh or cringe the more I read on.

The smut was overpowering; it was on every page, starting from page 1. It was too much. The stalking aspect was weird? awkward, maybe?
or maybe it was just the writing that I couldn't connect with?

Can we talk about how the MMCs LEAVE HER ROSES like they're Zade Meadows

The cringe dialogue kinda reminded me of Sick Boys by Clarissa Wild.

I'm sure a lot of people will enjoy this, but I didn't care for it. I felt like I was reading and reading and the words were just passing through without leaving any impact.

also, fuck Sebastian (Liv's fiancé) he was such an asshole

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𝓠𝓾𝓸𝓽𝓮𝓼:

➞Goddamn it, my cock throbbed. My balls were tight and felt as if they were prisoner to her.

➞“Mm… That’s my good little obsession answering when daddy calls,” Sin groaned in welcome, making my skin crawl. “What are you, my old creepy man now?” I asked with disgust. “No. I’m your shadow daddy, Liv,” Sin answered with a huskiness, wrapping me into his world.

➞He ignored my dumb-ass apology and turned his focus back on the door. His giant hand turned the doorknob and opened it. The room inside was dark as Bigfoot signaled for me to step through.

➞“Oh, but you smell like you are, and your pussy is our plaything. A toy we shouldn’t amuse ourselves with because we’re told not to. But we tend to not listen,” Sin breathed with a soft chuckle in my ear. “And we enjoy winding you up.”

➞My opinion didn’t matter, my voice didn’t matter. I was a dumb bitch who seemed fearless.

➞A half shriek escaped me, but Saint cut the noise short when he maneuvered my face to be below Sin’s dick that bobbed against my forehead, with his big balls dangling at my mouth. His crotch was inches from my face as he wasted no time and dipped his balls inside of my surprised mouth.
“No!” I squealed with my voice muffled by his giant nut sack.

➞I moved my hands and tried to shift my knees, but I couldn’t budge. All I accomplished was my hands pulling at the unmoving bedsheets under Sin’s weight. Saint held me trapped with his hands on my hips and his fingers dug into my skin. More bruises would form from the brutal force he inflicted as he backed my pussy further into him until I froze because the tip of his large mushroom head poked at my entrance. - "his large mushroom head" This just makes me think of mushrooms and how much I love them

➞The novel I read was a dark romance about a man obsessed with a woman he wanted and the lengths he’d go to all for her—all the unhinged things he’d do to her and all the people he’d kill because of her. The fictional story reminded me of the men who stalked me, but I was envious. This bitch only had one stalker while I had two. Two deranged, addicted, and gorgeous men. Goddamn. - This quote instantly pulled me out of the story and ultimately was the reason I wanted to DNF. I'll never understand why authors feel the need to mention characters reading 'romance' books—it always breaks the immersion for me. I swear they need to add a trigger warning just for it, like: "WARNING: This mentions the FMC reading a ROMANCE BOOK"


❥Stalker
❥Touch her and d!e
❥Morelly Grey
❥Enemies to lovers
❥Blackmail
❥Forced prox
❥Age Gap
❥Love/Hate
❥Billionaire
❥RH
❥Unhinged MCs
❥Blood Play
❥BDSM

I really appreciate receiving an ARC, but it wasn't for me in the end. Thank you, Breanne Bergie & NGC
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