This was a little disappointing tbh. For me it’s around a 2-5-3 stars

Firstly, there were a lot of mistakes when it comes to context, it felt like it wasn’t edited or if it was edited they took out some scenes which were important to make the next part of book understandable. For example, Grant (Mmc) told Noah (his daughter) that her mom (they’re separated) texted him after 9 months and was like this is your baby and a couple pages later he tells her I went to her first ultrasound with her. And the whole time i was which one id true?? Also his daughters named Noah and that always messed me up cause I was like does he have a son too? Secondly, the way Elena’s (fmc) infertility was handled was so weird to me. I don’t know why Noah just spoke about Elena’s issues with pregnancy in front of her dad and his friends. I get that she’s a kid but like I’m sorry what??

The most disappointing thing was the way Grant kept lying to Noah time and time again. The whole back story with Noah’s mom was so uncalled for. I felt like the author wanted the big X factor and included the most childish reason behind Grants lying and Noah’s mom.