Wow there was a lot more fighting and male fury in this than I expected. It was an interesting concept but with some pretty major problems that annoyed me (like, they know he becomes visible if covered in flour, yet they never use this tactic, instead constantly trying to tackle a man they can't see).

It is mostly told in a really distant, matter of fact way, so despite it being short it felt really long because I never got quite into it or felt attached to any of the characters. Doesn't help that none of the characters are likeable.

Despite this it does have a certain humour to it and was exciting at times.