First off, I hate the "Swearing doesn't count when..." line. That thing has been so overused now I'm surprised no one has called the author on it during editing. It might have been cute if said once or twice in the first book it was used in. But not over and over and over again.

The beginning wasn't bad, but the end was just this big jumble of names that I had a hard time keeping track of. Too many characters - with too many aliases - were introduced in this book. And the ending is just like this giant, messy knot of motives and coincidences that were just irritating. I feel like too much happened in the last part of the book, and that the actions and reveals should have been spread out a bit more.