A lot of fun, but there was something kind of breathless about it after a slow start. It felt messy and choppy. Plus I get annoyed by things like someone in London having a cardinal as a familiar, even though the familiars seemed more like spirit animals. The world building was a bit incoherent as well (that being one example). I sound very negative, but I did enjoy reading this. It had a lot of energy and potential; I wish it had been a bit better.