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A review by teresa10
Queen of Swords by Jerry Lambert
5.0
Good read
While Jerry Lambert has told a good light hearted story you will have to keep your wits about you as you read it. The story is lacking a good editor and proofreader to tighten up the story and errors. Character names and actions changed from one sentence to the next. The characters and plot suddenly does an 180 turn in the middle stopping the flow and making story unbelievable. Revelations spring up anywhere throughout the story while helpful are either in the wrong place or too contrived to allow the story to work. As I say it's like a first draft that needs work but overall would be a fun read when 'finished'.
While Jerry Lambert has told a good light hearted story you will have to keep your wits about you as you read it. The story is lacking a good editor and proofreader to tighten up the story and errors. Character names and actions changed from one sentence to the next. The characters and plot suddenly does an 180 turn in the middle stopping the flow and making story unbelievable. Revelations spring up anywhere throughout the story while helpful are either in the wrong place or too contrived to allow the story to work. As I say it's like a first draft that needs work but overall would be a fun read when 'finished'.