A review by emmacb
The Secret Commonwealth by Philip Pullman

4.0

A good read, but a couple of bits I wasn't sure about:
First, the love sub-plot that is developing with one of the characters doesn't feel very developed to me. I don't really see where the love has come from and frankly it comes across as a little creepy due to the lack of build-up. Its not an unbelievable pairing as such, I think I might even like it in another context but the fact that no time is dedicated to showing the feelings grow (at least on his side) means it feels a bit out of left field. Even on the other side it feels a little rushed. That said, it's a chunky book already so I suppose time is limited!

Secondly, the incident on the train felt a little unnecessary.. that being said, it is a representation of a genuine fear a lot of women have travelling alone, and Pullman is excellent at weaving things together so the narrative purpose of seemingly insignificant things comes clean at the end, so for now I will hold faith in his abilities!

Overall it was still an interesting enough read to make me carry it around to read on the way to work in its own separate bag when it didn't fit in my handbag!