I really liked it. Is was nice to hear what Tobias was thinking, especially during this scene. I only wish that Veronica had written a different scene, ideally the chasm scene where he rescues Tris, and what comes after, or the Ferris-wheel scene, or even just a longer scene. I would love an entire book from his POV, but I do know that this is unrealistic. I loved hearing how Tobias thought, how much he analyzed things, and how he already knew he had feelings for Tris. Overall, it was great.