I would say this book is very good for a self published author. I loved the MC and her love interest so so much (and their spice so good man does jack know how to write a love scene) and the story line and overall plot was there. There could’ve been more focus on the threat in front of them instead of the MC making stupid decisions to go back home knowing her damn brother is gonna do some f*ck sh*t. Like come on. Then…..
The ending was a whole other level of wtf!!!
I give this book four stars for now but my anger for the ending may not subside. Props to jack for pulling something off no author would do and that I did NOT see coming whatsoever. But I have some serious trust issues now.
I did feel like some more editing of grammar and over descriptive paragraphs needs to be done but other than that I am interested in the rest of the series but I will be 10x more apprehensive next time as her plot twists are like a 100 knives to the heart.
Overall though I was on the edge of my seat and thought about this book every moment I wasn’t reading it!