This was good, y’all are tripping. It definitely comes off as his first novel. Which isn’t a bad thing, it feels like a lot of the ideas here were later translated into the Mistborn series, in a much better way.

 I definitely had the thought of “but wait, what about X Y Z” at the end, I wish some of those things were touched on more.

There were parts where it felt like the wheels turned a bit to long, or things just sort of happened, but overall I had a good time.