Lindon's voice narrator was HOT. Who doesn't love a nice Scotsman???? Could have had the whole story in his POV and I would have swooned the whole thing.

I love the concept. I know I set one with a friend many years ago, but we both found love way before we were 40 (our set age). This one was a bit different b/c Lindon was actually in love with Stephanie. He should have just jumped ahead and dated her instead of waiting. I get (sorta) why he did it, but still when I made mine it wasn't b/c I secretly loved him, it was a true Plan B.

My other issue was that epilogue, I loved the little blindfolded scene, then it just got wordy. I needed need introspective monologue, I wanted future outcome.