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A review by mwhd
The Syndicater by RuNyx
3.5
WHAT THE FUCK, RUNYX? I TRUSTED YOU AND I WAS PATIENT AND THE PUBLISHING GOT PUSHED A HUNDRED TIMES ONLY FOR YOU TO TRY TO PROVE A STUPID POINT OF YOURS???
I have SO many issues with this book. Where do I even start?
1. The book started off looking like it was written by a man. When did we get back to talking about women that way in books WRITTEN BY WOMEN?
2. Lmao I basically skimmed through all Dainn and Luna povs they were TALKING TOO MUCH I don't even know how to explain it so consider this a very subjective opinion you can discard: they piss me off, they talk too much, they're so fake & their personalities stop with their trauma... in no way am I belittling trauma but it quite literally like they intentionally relive it
3. It's the fact that every chapter had "Tristan always deserved so much better" from different povs, but then Runyx self-hatred made an appearance and decided to endlessly ruin his life by making sure Dainn comes on top (???)
4. I'm fighting my way through reading this book coherently because apparently there was no time for proofreading for spelling mistakes and missing words
5. Four consecutive smut chapters... are we writing a book or are we ticking scenes off a checklist?
6. The scenes were all biasedly written for Luna & Dainn. It was as if the author intentionally brought down her other characters in favour of these two.
7. Why did she have to make out Tristan as the bad guy? The guy who put off marriage. The guy who isn't attentive to his girl (anymore at least). The guy who is so off putting in this book. THE GUY WHO "beyestakhsar" (no english translation ouch) AND DOESNT EVER SAY I LOVE YOU TO MORANA LIKE WHY. It's unbelievable really
8. I have to recomment on how the book was obv not read through by anyone whod notice all these spelling mistakes like yeah we all accidentally type heating instead of hearing sometimes but its too much and too often i find words that if it were skimmed through after the chapter was done or written with a few extra brain power they couldve been avoided
9. Tristan has alaays been my favourite, but she put him in SUCH A BAD LIGHT throughout this book that I'm here to talk about things he did that pissed me off. WHATS WRONG WITH BALANCING OUT THE RELATIOSHIP WITH A SIMPLE "I LOVE YOU"??? OR A TEAR WHEN SHE WALKS DOWN THE AISLE? OR, I DOMT KMOW, A RING??? Highly disappointed. Morana settled and not in a good way.
Now, this I DID like:
1. TristanMorana
2. Domestic TristanMorana w/ Xander
3. Domestic DanteAmara w/ Tempest
4. Domestic AlphaZephyr
5. TristanMorana again
6. Xander
7. Baby Tempest
8. XanderTempest, TristanAmara & DanteMorana siblinghood
9. TristanDanteAlpha & MoranaAmaraZephyr friendship
10. the very final chapter
It is so bittersweet finally closing this book and this series. It has been years and years. Unfortunately, we cant have everything we ask for but im glad i was here and high on the seratonin even if for such a short time.
I have SO many issues with this book. Where do I even start?
1. The book started off looking like it was written by a man. When did we get back to talking about women that way in books WRITTEN BY WOMEN?
2. Lmao I basically skimmed through all Dainn and Luna povs they were TALKING TOO MUCH I don't even know how to explain it so consider this a very subjective opinion you can discard: they piss me off, they talk too much, they're so fake & their personalities stop with their trauma... in no way am I belittling trauma but it quite literally like they intentionally relive it
3. It's the fact that every chapter had "Tristan always deserved so much better" from different povs, but then Runyx self-hatred made an appearance and decided to endlessly ruin his life by making sure Dainn comes on top (???)
4. I'm fighting my way through reading this book coherently because apparently there was no time for proofreading for spelling mistakes and missing words
5. Four consecutive smut chapters... are we writing a book or are we ticking scenes off a checklist?
6. The scenes were all biasedly written for Luna & Dainn. It was as if the author intentionally brought down her other characters in favour of these two.
7. Why did she have to make out Tristan as the bad guy? The guy who put off marriage. The guy who isn't attentive to his girl (anymore at least). The guy who is so off putting in this book. THE GUY WHO "beyestakhsar" (no english translation ouch) AND DOESNT EVER SAY I LOVE YOU TO MORANA LIKE WHY. It's unbelievable really
8. I have to recomment on how the book was obv not read through by anyone whod notice all these spelling mistakes like yeah we all accidentally type heating instead of hearing sometimes but its too much and too often i find words that if it were skimmed through after the chapter was done or written with a few extra brain power they couldve been avoided
9. Tristan has alaays been my favourite, but she put him in SUCH A BAD LIGHT throughout this book that I'm here to talk about things he did that pissed me off. WHATS WRONG WITH BALANCING OUT THE RELATIOSHIP WITH A SIMPLE "I LOVE YOU"??? OR A TEAR WHEN SHE WALKS DOWN THE AISLE? OR, I DOMT KMOW, A RING??? Highly disappointed. Morana settled and not in a good way.
Now, this I DID like:
1. TristanMorana
2. Domestic TristanMorana w/ Xander
3. Domestic DanteAmara w/ Tempest
4. Domestic AlphaZephyr
5. TristanMorana again
6. Xander
7. Baby Tempest
8. XanderTempest, TristanAmara & DanteMorana siblinghood
9. TristanDanteAlpha & MoranaAmaraZephyr friendship
10. the very final chapter
It is so bittersweet finally closing this book and this series. It has been years and years. Unfortunately, we cant have everything we ask for but im glad i was here and high on the seratonin even if for such a short time.