A review by lauraborkpower
The Merciless by Danielle Vega

2.0

The overall story and the twists were fun, and Vega can put together some fast, violent action sequences. But the pacing does a disservice here because there's not enough plot, so it feels rushed and as though it's all happening within the span of a couple of days.

If Vega had built it out into a book twice as long and really spent time developing the character relationships, this could have been great (and the writing could have used more time, too; there are some pretty over-used and awkward passages in here). But as it stands, it's an entertaining one-day read that I would only recommend if you already have a copy hanging around and need something to do for a few hours.