I got 33% through and it just couldn't maintain my attention. It seemed like it was dragging and all I had was a lot of confusion and NO ANSWERS. I don't necessarily mind that, but when nothing is clear it's like there's nothing to suck me in then, kwim? The prologue sucked me right in...I even enjoyed the in the head stuff when Sara's in the water (between Sara and Adan). But I found myself expecting something to happen at the end of the chapter, only to turn the page and have that something never addressed. So then I would start flipping ahead, looking for the explanation that wasn't there. Anyways, all in all, I can't give you feedback about the book since I gave up so early. But the editing truly was atrocious. It wasn't even small mistakes, it was JARRING mistakes that take you out of the mindset. It was the kind that if SOMEONE had read the book once, they would have been able to fix the mistake. I tolerate a lot of little mistakes, as someone who thoroughly enjoys independent authors who often can't afford editors. But seriously, read through your book once you finish it to just clean up the big glaring mistakes. So if that kind of thing bothers you a lot, I would steer clear...otherwise I hope you have more patience than me, b/c it sounds like there is payoff, I just don't have the patience to wait for it....