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A review by moodyromancereader
Mold My Future by Ami Bella
3.5
I was really excited to read Ami Bella's debut novel because the blurb and the plot sounded really interesting.
The story is told in dual POVs by Rosie and Victor. Although, I did feel as if I was reading one person’s POV the entire time.
The MMC, Victor, is a millionaire and comes across as too perfect. I felt that Victor didn’t have any depth as a character, and we don’t really learn much about him besides knowing he’s a millionaire and his business. He just seems to be the answer to all of Rosie’s problems. He does seem caring, but again, no depth.
When it came to Victor and Rosie’s relationship, every conflict that Victor and Rosie had in their relationship was solved by his money. It just felt like their relationship ship lacked depth as well. It is insta-love, but I would have enjoyed seeing their relationship develop further.
I enjoyed learning about Rosie, including that she is Latina, has her own business, and her passions. But there is also a lot of unresolved trauma, and again, Victor is there to solve the problems with his wealth. We don’t see Rosie heal in this story. Victor’s ability to solve her issues felt very superficial. And aside from Rosie’s business and family issues, it would have been great to see more growth in her character.
I am eager to read book two. And to see how Rosie’s business does, even if she is a side character in future books.
Thank you to the author for sending me an ARC.
Graphic: Eating disorder, Death of parent, and Injury/Injury detail