The idea of this story sounded more interesting, than the execution of it. The start and ending of the story were both good, but were dragged down with the middle where nothing really happened. The writing style was confusing, which helped with mystery but also made me glance over parts of the lines. The bread imagery was used very well. It was referenced in a lot of elements of the story or metaphors. I missed something that made this story feel alive. It felt rather monotonous to read.