Overall, a fun read. Really enjoyed the song additions for each chapter! 
Loli, our main character, was fun at first but I did end up getting frustrated with her quite a bit throughout. I get teens do teen things but man if I had a friend like her, I simply would not have that friend for very long. 
I generally liked the ending (since it was the ending I was hoping for tbh) and would def consider more from the author.