This was a lot of fun. I don't know much about Carol Danvers/Captain Marvel or her early incarnations but now I know a little about Kamala Khan and I really dig her.

The teenage voice is written very well here and I really enjoyed her interactions with Bruno and her family (especially her brother).

The 'voiceover' narration was a little annoying at times, it unnecessarily dragged me out of the story.

I look forward to reading more.