A review by lanidon
Berries and Greed by Lily Mayne

3.0

This would've been a five star romance if not for three things: 

1) the annoying stoner stuff

2) repeatedly and consistently talking about menstruation during sex scenes for a decent chunk of the book. I don't need to hear about her grinding against her pad ever, much less like three separate sex scenes

3) The way the story stops after they have sex the first time and it's just erotica from there out. The sex scenes are above average, but they're exhausting when that's all that's happening. I wanted more relationship moments and more development of them both together and apart. Instead I get sex scenes with some brief fluff in between until the epilogue

I'm going to read the sequel, but I'm just a little sad since the first half was phenomenal. Show me those moments of bonding with his family! Show me them both trying to get out of their shell together! Don't spend 200 pages on sex scenes and then just tell me they did other stuff in the epilogue. I want to see the domestic moments too, please, I'm begging the industry at this point