Well buddy we got a classic case of not enough characterization and too much gratuitous banging.

And I have to write this down or I’ll forget, but the sheer amount of parroting back each character would do in a conversation almost drove me to drink.
Please find an example below in what I would like to imagine is Mackenzie and Noah planning a date night:
“Are we on for dinner tonight?”
“Dinner?”
“Yes, we told Parker we’d meet him at the restaurant”
“The restaurant?”
“Yeah, our favorite one down the road!”
“The road?”
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