A review by allycat143
Dark Water by J.A. Armitage

Did not finish book.
Disappointing. It was a great idea, poorly executed.

Pros: plot, grammar, sentence structure
The storyline was good, and the sentence quality was professional.

Cons: story speed, main character is an idiot

Unfortunately, the story speed felt like my 9 year old son. Slow down. Double the length of the book and take the time to give details and develop the story, not just jump from one scene to the next.

And I guess it is a good thing the princess is rich and pretty, because she is a teenage moron. Crazy, huge events happen around her and she thinks about all the wrong things...namely, the hot guy and nothing else relevant.