dnfing this, there is like 80pgs left that i havent read and i just dont see this getting better—books shouldnt peak at the beginning and sad too say it did... i saw so much promise i even over looked the editing issues. i wanted to see more river but again the beginning was as good as it gets i can tell she is older than 19 because river doesnt act 19... i picture him by the sounds of it hes in his like 30s? and kamzin—her only traits are taking in scenery, missing her sister, and flirting/leading boys on *shrug* also wtf was ragtooths purpose??