This series is my comfort series and I’ll forever love it but there was a MAJOY inconsistency in this book which really irked me. At the beginning of the book when Stormchaser spoke to Dell about her last day of school it was written that “tomorrow was her sixteenth birthday”, however MUCH later in the story (3rd day in Piloria) Stormchaser awakens to Reban telling her happy birthday. To me this just seemed sloppy and gross, to have such a huge plot hole so apparent in the story.

Otherwise the book is excellent, I love the relationship building between Lincoln and Storm, as well as Leif and Jesa, and Reban and Storm.

I love the world building and the way Storm seems so conflicted about what they’re doing. I like how her beliefs are being challenged throughout the book. However I think the story would be better suited to a longer format, to really delve into the characters and world.

All in all, pretty good book outside of the HUGE plot hole.