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A review by phyllica_reads
Wicked Obsidian : A dark and depraved taboo Halloween novella by Mortala Author
dark
mysterious
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A
2.0
This story has such a good set of bones to be a truly dark and sinister story, it simply needed more editorial/proofreading love.
For a novella, this story does have a lot going on so the reader does get a rather full story. However, on the flip side to that, there were moments where the text was really wordy and often repeated many phrases and words. There were also times where the text would repeat whole paragraphs and it left me feeling jarred and pulled from the story. During paragraphs where the descriptions became redundant, I would have liked to see more plot development/back story.
For a novella, this story does have a lot going on so the reader does get a rather full story. However, on the flip side to that, there were moments where the text was really wordy and often repeated many phrases and words. There were also times where the text would repeat whole paragraphs and it left me feeling jarred and pulled from the story. During paragraphs where the descriptions became redundant, I would have liked to see more plot development/back story.