A review by readerlatte
Toward a Secret Sky by Heather Maclean

2.0

My Review: I was so enjoying this story. It was well paced and had a lot of mystery in it. I loved the romance that was coming and the suspense of figuring out what in the world was going on. But that all came to a crashing halt when around 70 pages our heroine finds some girl laying in a pew and this girl holds all of the answers that she was looking for. She knows where Maren's parents worked, the necklace, and she just goes on an info dumping story of telling Maren everything she needed to know. For me that killed the story. It was way to much to believe that this girl who says o don't let any information fall into the wrong hands. That she would just blurt out all this information to this girl that she JUST met. It was just to much for me to believe. So although I would kind of still want to know what was up the story just pretty much fell apart. I wished that this girl didn't exist in this story and maybe Maren could have overheard something from the nun that was there or something else. Because this just did not work for me at all.



Go Into This One Knowing: Unrealistic, Info dumping the Mystery starting at page 70