This was a DNF for me. Its a shame because I was really looking forward to reading this book. I read MINE and gave it five stars because I loved it. CLAIM however was really hard or me to get through.

My problem wasn’t with the MMC, Micheal and his brothers. My problem with the FMC, Lara.

Lara seemed to just be OK with this stranger putting her in his car, his sister driving off with her, Micheal’s brother picking her up and carrying her for him (which was explained by Micheal’s problem with touch) and spending the night at his home with total strangers.

Unlike with Charlie, Lara didn’t try at all to fight or escape. Her actions from the beginning when she met Micheal seemed very off and the plot at times seemed disjointed. By 48%, the book still didn’t make any sense to me any more than when it began. Since I didn’t want to ruin the ratings for this author, I will refrain from assigning this any stars. This book needs a HARD EDIT. As there were many things in this book that didn’t need to be there and there was not enough common sense behind the actions of some of the characters.

I hope the author obtains an editor and re-releases this book so that I can finish Micheal’s story.