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A review by inmydreams
Binding Breath by Adara Wolf
3.0
This was alright, just not impacting enough. It would've worked better if the plot went darker. There were elements to it that could've been used to the max, but the ending felt lackluster.
The plot is about Michael, he can use magic and it's the reason he gets kidnapped by Cesare. He can also use magic on his own, but he needs Michael's abilities so he binds him. Now Michael won't be able to breathe without Cesare's permission. Cesare's intentions is to make a police officer, Daniel, to obey him without fault since he's had interest in him for some time.
This sounds incredible, and the setting is very interesting, but it needed a twist. I liked the MMM elements, I believe it would've been hotter if. Cesare was also a bit too tame for my liking. I also thought that Michael . I was also expecting an actual . The actual ending wasn't as fun or twisty.
I expect a lot from this author because even her short stories are well rounded. The more fucked up they are, the better and more impactful. One thing for sure, she knowns how to create an intriguing plot and has a good writting. This wasn't as bad as I make it sound, I actually enjoyed it but I expected more.
Tags: (can miss some, heads up that I don't tag everything)
-POV: third person
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The plot is about Michael, he can use magic and it's the reason he gets kidnapped by Cesare. He can also use magic on his own, but he needs Michael's abilities so he binds him. Now Michael won't be able to breathe without Cesare's permission. Cesare's intentions is to make a police officer, Daniel, to obey him without fault since he's had interest in him for some time.
This sounds incredible, and the setting is very interesting, but it needed a twist. I liked the MMM elements, I believe it would've been hotter if
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Michael and Daniel ended up irrevocably trapped to Cesare and the mindbreak happened to both instead of only oneSpoiler
would bind himself even more to Cesare by accident and lose his personality like DanielSpoiler
train sex scene or prolongued threesomeI expect a lot from this author because even her short stories are well rounded. The more fucked up they are, the better and more impactful. One thing for sure, she knowns how to create an intriguing plot and has a good writting. This wasn't as bad as I make it sound, I actually enjoyed it but I expected more.
Tags: (can miss some, heads up that I don't tag everything)
-POV: third person
-Content warnings:
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coercion, dubcon, kidnapping (all of these between MCs), homophobia, mindbreak-Elements:
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forced bond-Kinks:
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possessiveness, chocking (breath play), body mofification (ML carves on MC's skin as part of enchantment)-Sexual act(s):
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barebacking, creampie, blowjobs, humping-grinding-Dynamic: