I read this as some preparation for a story concept I've got in mind and wanted to see how other authors managed it.

The tie into salem was a little overwrought, and the janitor-tools-as-weapons a little cheesy, but beyond that the story was actually pretty well told. The characters of Spencer and Daisy in particular were well realized and I loved them and their endearing flaws.

The concept was a little goofy but the story was definitely well told.