You have a gorgeous map and a good potential for WB, to only waste it on a lackluster romance that was drier than hardtack.

Characters: Everyone was a trope, sadly, the only POC was comedic relief which is yikes. Descriptions of people were barely done so hard to imagine everyone. So I just put a stereotypical goth with different hair colors because that was the only way I can imagine them.

Pacing is fast.

Prose is OK.

Plot: Predictable

Worldbuilding not original but could had the potential for a female DnD group and did absolutely nothing with.

Thankfully didn't buy the sequel (shame cause it seemed more interesting than this book.)

Really disappointed, could have been a good debut.

1.5/5