This just wasn't it for me, the first 20 pages I enjoyed but after that I didn't feel dragged into Mona's life or cared at all about any of the messiness she was getting into. I didn't really like any of the characters but never got to know any of them deep enough to care about their flaws or struggles? I know it's a satire of the writing industry, and at first thought it all funny, but after 20ish pages it felt like a bit that was going on too long.