honestly a bit bummed that the story didn’t really come together for me at the end - i kind of need a bit of realism in the payoff for such a realistic harm being done
also i do think the “reveal” on the above realistic harm came too late in the story - the pacing of the last 40 pages was just a bit rushed
really excited to go read arshi’s poetry now because she has got a great sense for language and i’m into it