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A review by cheryls
Alpha Mountain Man by Claire Angel
2.0
This is book 2 in the Billionaire Lovers series and it features Kenneth and Chloe. He is a semi-recluse who owns a resort in Mexico and also has MANY issues in regards to his late wife’s death. Kenneth is rude and completely stuck in his misery. Chloe suffered a broken heart when she was younger and it has affected her every relationship. She seems a little desperate for that perfect relationship. It’s time for her to take a vacation to a resort in Mexico.
This story has a stop and start feel to it. There’s no flow whatsoever. The writing kept jumping within the same paragraph, from first person to third person. Also, I often find myself reading the same scene twice because it’s written from his POV and then next from her POV. There were A LOT of loose ends and A LOT of unanswered questions.
This story has a stop and start feel to it. There’s no flow whatsoever. The writing kept jumping within the same paragraph, from first person to third person. Also, I often find myself reading the same scene twice because it’s written from his POV and then next from her POV. There were A LOT of loose ends and A LOT of unanswered questions.