A review by bekkerrr
Dead Moons Rising by Jack Whitney

2.0

If you plan on reading this here is your TW, abuse and sexual assault

This story has a lot of promise! I hear it’s being edited and I’d love to read a copy when that happens. My issue isn’t with grammar errors, it’s the repetitive phrases being used. I have close to 800 highlights and notes of fists being clenched and brows being raised etc. Also, there are a few things that don’t make sense and hopefully after editing it’ll be crystal clear.